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If you are looking to argue over conflicts between TNSC and Acadia, refer to [[TNSC-Acadia Conflict]] as it has been moved there. |
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==To-Do== |
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Add images of TNSC and all that jazz |
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Remove blatant bias from article |
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bloof (July 2, 2022) |
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current issues: |
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* overall, article is written as a story rather than a wiki article |
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* writes Rain, ZombieStriker, and other TNSC members as characters in a story as opposed to an unbiased report |
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- Acadian Conflict |
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-- references past occasions that do not pertain to current |
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-- claims that acadian members treated Rain poorly, as well as multiple implications that Acadia is an imperialist state while TNSC is pacifist. The way this is written is extremely biased |
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- JuniorTide's house "griefed" with signs |
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-- completely unrelated to TNSC |
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- Pentigrass incident |
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-- implies Acadian discussions based on unfounded rumors |
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- hawkeye0066 - Acadia Incident |
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-- continues notion of painting Rain in a certain light, rather than an unbiased article |
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-- "against our warnings" "We held him accountable for his bad behavior!", written from TNSC perspective |
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- Side boxes/battle boxes/don't know what they're called |
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-- should be removed |
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-- "Massive loss of dignity. L." |
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-- extreme bias |
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- Acadia Raids TNSC's Bunker |
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-- "Rain was perfectly fine..." should be removed, bias |
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-- "horrible truth" bias |
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-- "probably an alt" bias/unneeded |
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-- "toxic actions" bias |
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-- provides a vote count from another nation's private channels with no citation |
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- TTastic, Okx, MrJeremyFarmer Raid |
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-- first paragraph should be removed, written as a story |
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-- "shitter behavior" bias |
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- Rumors Spread *through* Rain's goons.. |
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-- should be removed or condensed. repeats previously stated parts of article |
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- "Zombie was.." |
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-- based on discord conversations |
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-- "Zombie is a good person" bias |
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-- section is almost entirely bias |
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-- direct attack on myself for CivMC actions, written on TNSC page (civclassic) |
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- TNSC Post-War |
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-- there was never a war, section titled in bad faith |
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-- First sentence written as though its the dramatic end to a story |
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-- Implies feelings of TNSC (now Consortium) |
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-- second paragraph needs to be rewritten to wiki standards, I wrote this but was unable to word correctly. |
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-- third paragraph written with bias as well, while directly contradicting the first paragraph of the same article admitting that they broke the agreement that was had between Acadia and TNSC |
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-- ignores multiple exchanges had on discord between TNSC and Acadia where TNSC refused to provide Acadia with the location of Rain's logbox, further disrupting the deal. |
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-- Final sentence of article written as a conclusion to a story, rather than the end of a wiki article |
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Latest revision as of 18:02, 6 July 2022
If you are looking to argue over conflicts between TNSC and Acadia, refer to TNSC-Acadia Conflict as it has been moved there.