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Talk:The No State Commune

Revision as of 03:29, 3 July 2022 by Bloof (talk | contribs) (thoughts on article and what needs to be amended. Much of article written in bad taste/bias.)

To-Do

Add images of TNSC and all that jazz Remove blatant bias from article

bloof (July 2, 2022) current issues:

  • overall, article is written as a story rather than a wiki article
  • writes Rain, ZombieStriker, and other TNSC members as characters in a story as opposed to an unbiased report

- Acadian Conflict -- references past occasions that do not pertain to current -- claims that acadian members treated Rain poorly, as well as multiple implications that Acadia is an imperialist state while TNSC is pacifist. The way this is written is extremely biased - JuniorTide's house "griefed" with signs -- completely unrelated to TNSC - Pentigrass incident -- implies Acadian discussions based on unfounded rumors - hawkeye0066 - Acadia Incident -- continues notion of painting Rain in a certain light, rather than an unbiased article -- "against our warnings" "We held him accountable for his bad behavior!", written from TNSC perspective - Side boxes/battle boxes/don't know what they're called -- should be removed -- "Massive loss of dignity. L." -- extreme bias - Acadia Raids TNSC's Bunker -- "Rain was perfectly fine..." should be removed, bias -- "horrible truth" bias -- "probably an alt" bias/unneeded -- "toxic actions" bias -- provides a vote count from another nation's private channels with no citation - TTastic, Okx, MrJeremyFarmer Raid -- first paragraph should be removed, written as a story -- "shitter behavior" bias - Rumors Spread *through* Rain's goons.. -- should be removed or condensed. repeats previously stated parts of article - "Zombie was.." -- based on discord conversations -- "Zombie is a good person" bias -- section is almost entirely bias -- direct attack on myself for CivMC actions, written on TNSC page (civclassic) - TNSC Post-War -- there was never a war, section titled in bad faith -- First sentence written as though its the dramatic end to a story -- Implies feelings of TNSC (now Consortium) -- second paragraph needs to be rewritten to wiki standards, I wrote this but was unable to word correctly. -- third paragraph written with bias as well, while directly contradicting the first paragraph of the same article admitting that they broke the agreement that was had between Acadia and TNSC -- ignores multiple exchanges had on discord between TNSC and Acadia where TNSC refused to provide Acadia with the location of Rain's logbox, further disrupting the deal. -- Final sentence of article written as a conclusion to a story, rather than the end of a wiki article

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