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:Firstly you did not only revert my removal of divisions, you also reverted me changing the headers to more valid and senseful names (invasion -> war). Secondly, the banning of some Butternutters is not itself sufficiently notable for a section by itself- for God's sake, it is two sentences in length. Freeing the Gang Shi fighters was also not notable enough for an entire section dedicated to it, it's about one quite short paragraph in length. I understand wanting to split off the "Exile of Icenian Government" part to its own section, so that could be kept, but "On 13 June, Gwua stated that the war would not end with the fall of Icenia, and that it was "just the beginning of the campaign", with the rest of the Security Enhancement Coalition firmly within their crosshairs.[citation needed]. Also on June 13th, SEC fighters pearled a Butternut login in a door tunnel at Whole Foods." and "The same day, Bloom issued a bounty of 128 diamond blocks and Diet_Cola’s spawnbook for the pearl of chosentwicelol.[7]" should be in the same paragraph.
:"Attacks on Cane Corp and Loss of Gang Shi and Butternut combatants" is an excessively lengthy title, and half of it is unnecessary anyways- in war, you lose combatants, that doesn't need to be noted in the header. And the nether infrastructure section could be kept, but "Combat in Icenia City" should be changed to "Battles in Icenia City". In addition, the "Butternut forces encountering resistance" photo is quite irrelevant and not necessary, it shows a guy on fire and other soldiers in armor. The "SEC POV Skybridging the Butternut Vault" photo is also not worthy to be in the article, it has some ppl standing, not relevant. We don't need that many photos in the article, it's excessive, and plus having them all aligned on the right looks ugly. Having too many sections, some for quite trivial events, is also excessive and what I was trying to avoid. [[User:Presidentofyes12|Presidentofyes12]] ([[User talk:Presidentofyes12|talk]]) 22:21, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
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