Talk:The No State Commune: Difference between revisions
thoughts on article and what needs to be amended. Much of article written in bad taste/bias.
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Add images of TNSC and all that jazz
Remove blatant bias from article
bloof (July 2, 2022)
current issues:
* overall, article is written as a story rather than a wiki article
* writes Rain, ZombieStriker, and other TNSC members as characters in a story as opposed to an unbiased report
- Acadian Conflict
-- references past occasions that do not pertain to current
-- claims that acadian members treated Rain poorly, as well as multiple implications that Acadia is an imperialist state while TNSC is pacifist. The way this is written is extremely biased
- JuniorTide's house "griefed" with signs
-- completely unrelated to TNSC
- Pentigrass incident
-- implies Acadian discussions based on unfounded rumors
- hawkeye0066 - Acadia Incident
-- continues notion of painting Rain in a certain light, rather than an unbiased article
-- "against our warnings" "We held him accountable for his bad behavior!", written from TNSC perspective
- Side boxes/battle boxes/don't know what they're called
-- should be removed
-- "Massive loss of dignity. L."
-- extreme bias
- Acadia Raids TNSC's Bunker
-- "Rain was perfectly fine..." should be removed, bias
-- "horrible truth" bias
-- "probably an alt" bias/unneeded
-- "toxic actions" bias
-- provides a vote count from another nation's private channels with no citation
- TTastic, Okx, MrJeremyFarmer Raid
-- first paragraph should be removed, written as a story
-- "shitter behavior" bias
- Rumors Spread *through* Rain's goons..
-- should be removed or condensed. repeats previously stated parts of article
- "Zombie was.."
-- based on discord conversations
-- "Zombie is a good person" bias
-- section is almost entirely bias
-- direct attack on myself for CivMC actions, written on TNSC page (civclassic)
- TNSC Post-War
-- there was never a war, section titled in bad faith
-- First sentence written as though its the dramatic end to a story
-- Implies feelings of TNSC (now Consortium)
-- second paragraph needs to be rewritten to wiki standards, I wrote this but was unable to word correctly.
-- third paragraph written with bias as well, while directly contradicting the first paragraph of the same article admitting that they broke the agreement that was had between Acadia and TNSC
-- ignores multiple exchanges had on discord between TNSC and Acadia where TNSC refused to provide Acadia with the location of Rain's logbox, further disrupting the deal.
-- Final sentence of article written as a conclusion to a story, rather than the end of a wiki article
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