Talk:Orthodoxy: Difference between revisions

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(B) Minimization of the centrality of [[Indoja]] to [[Adina]] pre imperator's-hostile-takeover. More should be added clarifying that until the Republican revolution, very few practitioners of Orthodoxy lived in Adina besides [[ImperatorMendes]] himself.

- [[MrJoCrafter]] [[User talk:MrJoCrafter|(talk)]] 20:36 (UTC) January 12th, 2022<blockquote>In regard to point (A) I would like to point out that the statement attached was non-specific to any individual, mentioning "Franconia" only. Nonetheless this section has now been revised in line with the request that it be from a source not implicated in the sacking of the [[Republic of Arlington|Republic of Arlington.]]

- [[MrJoCrafter]] [[User talk:MrJoCrafter|(talk)]] 20:36 (UTC) January 12th, 2022

In regard to point (B) whilst the page is about Orthodoxy, it is true that it must accurately reflect the religion's state within society. In this I fail how the article exaggerates the size of or significance of Orthodoxy (relative to other religions present). For example the article references the census twice: the first stating that the Orthodox faith made up 15% of the country and the second attesting to "slight gains" in proportion. Another description of the state of the faith in Adina was as a "small, growing minority". The words small, minority, coupled with the reference to censuses broadly reiterating this emphasises with some clarity that the proportion of Orthodox within the population was low during this time. Therefore in this regard, I do not believe the article to require further clarification.</blockquote>

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 (B) Minimization of the centrality of [[Indoja]] to [[Adina]] pre imperator's-hostile-takeover. More should be added clarifying that until the Republican revolution, very few practitioners of Orthodoxy lived in Adina besides [[ImperatorMendes]] himself.
+- [[MrJoCrafter]] [[User talk:MrJoCrafter|(talk)]] 20:36 (UTC) January 12th, 2022<blockquote>In regard to point (A) I would like to point out that the statement attached was non-specific to any individual, mentioning "Franconia" only. Nonetheless this section has now been revised in line with the request that it be from a source not implicated in the sacking of the [[Republic of Arlington|Republic of Arlington.]]
-- [[MrJoCrafter]] [[User talk:MrJoCrafter|(talk)]] 20:36 (UTC) January 12th, 2022
+In regard to point (B) whilst the page is about Orthodoxy, it is true that it must accurately reflect the religion's state within society. In this I fail how the article exaggerates the size of or significance of Orthodoxy (relative to other religions present). For example the article references the census twice: the first stating that the Orthodox faith made up 15% of the country and the second attesting to "slight gains" in proportion. Another description of the state of the faith in Adina was as a "small, growing minority". The words small, minority, coupled with the reference to censuses broadly reiterating this emphasises with some clarity that the proportion of Orthodox within the population was low during this time. Therefore in this regard, I do not believe the article to require further clarification.</blockquote>

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